This is my final film storyboard, it is quite simple but tells the story well. There is a beginning, a middle with obstacles that include running late, a busy train station, waiting for a train, putting on make up, looking at a map, getting lost and an ending, the lady turns up and her boyfriend has gone. Some of the feedback i got from this storyboard included; must make it clear that he is waiting for her, introduce him early on in the film, make her keep looking at the time to show she is running late, good obstacles, clear storyboard. I will use the feedback to improve my story and really exaggerate the rush and struggle the lady is in to meet the man. I am planning to spend a day filming and 1-2 days editing and adding sound.
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