Second Storyboard

This is a first draft of my storyboard, I have tried to change a serious situation into a funny one by making the people into animals. I think it works well and is a creative alternative to the real story. It is also very childlike which is relevant as i was a child at the time and loved wild animals. So I am incorporating two memories from my childhood, one happy memory and the other not so happy memory. I want to work on the ending as i don't think it is as good as it could be but I like the rest of the animation. I am still going to have my dad narrating the days events throughout the story which I think will work well and contradict what is going on.